Restraining me
Tied on the same place
Seeing the same faces
I'm stuck
and I wanna break free
I wanna travel the world
roam freely
I come in many vibrant colours
Bring joy to others
but be careful....
I'm more fragile than you think
with enough pressure
You can pop me
One single stab
I will break
So please be gentle
and kind
Soon enough
the air in my body wil run out
and I will be deflated
you need to actually state what your metaphor is somewhere in your poem. also try to provide longer lines, you need to explain why you feel the way you do, why do you want to break free, what is holding you back, etc. as(2)
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